Category: Writers Block
Well, this was inspired by the quote at the top witch is from Rent. Enjoy.
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“I know I’ve seen you out and about, when I used to go out.”-Roger [light my candle]
The club is everything its name implies, from the darkly paneled walls to the soft lighting and sharp talent that is currently writhing on stage. He’s hidden in a back corner, observing and hoping not to be seen. The soft white of the silk restraints contrasts with the dark skin they’re restraining and he smiles approvingly. The muscles in her legs bunch and release as she sways against the pole and the slight motion sends a ripple up her thighs, to her rolling liquid hips, threw her thrusting pelvis and finally into her bound arms above her head. The smile that crosses her face as she gazes out over the assembled crowd is slow and seductive and for a moment, her eyes lock on him. His breath catches and he freezes. There is something in that intense gaze, something foreign and familiar, alluring and dangerous, all at once. When she is untied, she seems to move with even more intensity, her whole body becoming an object, a tool, really, of pure sex. It seems to ooze out of her pores, along with the light sheen of sweat that now slicks her skin. Her hip thrusts are slower and more sensual, her eyes brighter molten pools and when, at last, she raps herself around the pole, grinding slowly, barely a movement at all, he straightens up. To the casual viewer, it seems as though the show is over, but he can feel that she’s messing with their heads. He doesn’t know what it is, but he knows, with out a doubt, she is planning one final move and he can’t wait to see it.
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That was a very good start, so, what happens next? You write really well, very descriptive. It seems like your characters are full of thoughts. Nice one. Your both showing and telling the story. Good imagery You combined the settings, characters, plot, and description all at the same time. That is pretty neat. Good job.
I don't think I'm going to continue it. Thank you for your comments, though.